Tell Your Customers about Product Benefits
Posted on 04-13-2009
We are doing some rework of web page content here at Bizmanualz. One thing we try to be consciously aware of is not filling our web pages with “we.”
We all like to talk about ourselves, even in business contexts, like how much expertise and experience we have. And we like to talk about our product’s great features.
But that is not usually the main thing customers want to know. What they really want to know is how it helps them. So whether you are writing web pages, product brochures, or sales sheets, minimize talking about yourself. Plus, when you talk about your product, focus more on how the product will benefit the reader and less on the technical features of the product.
For example, if you produce a cordless drill, it may be appropriate to mention that you have been manufacturing drills for 50 years, but it should not be the primary focus. Also, telling potential customers the drill has a 24 volt nickel-cadmium battery and a titanium case may be great, but it would probably be more meaningful if you tell them it will hold a charge for eight hours of drilling and stand up to the roughest use.
Experienced sales copy writers seem to agree. It is okay to tell customers about yourself and to list product features. But first tell them exactly how these things will benefit them.







